제가 교정받고 보내고 싶지만 마땅히 보일 곳이 없어서요(주말에는 번역회사도 쉬고).
이렇게 염치없이 부탁드립니다. 교정 좀 해주세요.
Dear Professor 000
Hello, Dr. 000
I'm 000. Thank you so much for giving me more time to consider your offer.
Could I ask something about financial support?
I was wondering students who receive the graduate assistantship at the beginning Ph.D have many possibilities to keep it continually for completing their degrees. Also, if I work as a research assistant, what kind of researches or works will I participate? Financial support is very important factor that influence to my decision.
Information that Korean students gave me is very helpful. I'll try to decide your offer unitl early next week. Thank you again for your consideration.